Ok I have finally decided to upload 1 of my tracks

[agent709]

Nobody checks that sticky in that one forum, or that forum for the matter, so here is the music page link:

www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=231358


Be sure to vote Hot instead of Flop too unless you're mean :-P I need to get more attention to see what more people think of it.
I've only worked on it about an hour now. Things I need to work on:

Blending the piano with the rest when it first comes in
A longer slowdown from original beat to slower beat

Lsit any more suggestions. I only want to use these 4 instruments so don't say 'add this synth' or something. ;P

[SSC]

I think it's pretty good. It's really hard for me to try and find a beat, but it's definitely different.

I really liked the rest of the song once the piano came in at about 1:30 through the song, and I liked the eerie synths near the end.

Honestly, I'm not much of a electronica/techno person myself, but I feel that you're going for more of an experimental electronica, which is cool.

I guess I don't really have any recommendations on things to work on, but... good job!

[agent709]

Updated - changed piano and made it start it a bit smoother, made a longer slowdown

[agent709]

I'll do the same! IT's 13 on Ambient by the way, which is really good for me

[agent709]

How can you choose which one ranks in the main electronica? I am working on another song but I wanna keep and foremostly up for abit seeing as its only 272 in electronica whole.

And yeah, they update 4 AM EST or so.